A Shining Star一颗闪亮的星
A good teacher is like a shining star to students. Miss Li, my senior middle school English teacher, is a shining star in my life.一个好老师对学生来说就像一颗闪亮的星。李老师，我高中时的英语老师，就是我生命中的一颗闪亮的星。
When I began my senior middle school years, I had difficulty in learning English. I dared not speak English aloud in public because of my poor pronunciation and intonation. I could not get high marks and grammar was not right at all. Afraid of being lanughed at, I never put up my hand to answer questions in English class. When Miss Li found out my situation, she encouraged me and lent me a hand, which rapidly improved my English. With her help, I became interested in English and eventually got high marks.刚上高中时，我英语学得很吃力。我不敢在公开场合说英语，因为我的语音、语调很糟糕，英语成绩很差，语法一塌糊涂。害怕被嘲笑，所以英语课上我从来不举手回答问题。李老师发现我的情况后，向我伸出了援助之手，并鼓励我。这一切使我很快提高了英语水平。在她的帮助下，我渐渐对英语感兴趣了，成绩也提高了。
Miss Li, like a shining star, shines in my path of success.李老师，就像一颗闪亮的星照耀着我前进的道路。