Shanghai is my favorite city. I like it because I was born in there, and a lot of my family members and my friends live there. The shopping in Shanghai is cheaper than here, but its expensive in China. I have a lot of things to do there, like: shopping, playing, going to my friends home And therere also a lot of places that are interesting. In Shanghai, people speak the same language as I do. I was there for 13 years! I left there on August, 18th, 2005. And I was there because I was born in there and I lived there.
上海是我最喜欢的城市，我喜欢它因为我在那里出生。而且我有很多的家人和朋友都住在那里。在上海购物要比这里便宜,但是在中国就昂贵了。我有很多事情要做，比如:购物，玩，去我的朋友家里而且还有很多有趣的地方。在上海,人们和我说的是同样的语言。我在那里呆了13年了!我,2005年8月18号离开了那里。我在那里，是因为我在那里出生，我住在那里。
Therere a lot of people in Shanghai. The people are like me. We all speak the same language. The people in Shanghai are busy and friendly. And Shanghai is also and international city. Its beautiful and fancy. Therere a lot of tall buildings. Thats why Shanghai is my favorite city. Its my home city. I love Shanghai!!!
有很多人在上海。像我这样的人。我们都说同样的语言。上海的人都很忙也很友好。上海也是一个国际城市。它美丽和令人向往。那里有很多高大的建筑物。这就是为什么我最喜欢的城市是上海。这是我的家乡。我爱上海! ! !
Id like to go back to Shanghai, but just for a visit. Although Shanghai is good, Id like to live here because Id like to study here. I only get a little homework and the air here is flasher than Shanghai. The weather is hot in Shanghai. And the best time of year to go there is spring, because in spring, the weather is cool and warm. But some people asked me: Why dont we go there in the fall? The fall is also cool and warm. I dont think so, because in Shanghai, the fall is still very hot. Id like to recommend this place to other because I want more and more people to know and visit my hometown. I hope if I ask my friends: Have you ever been to Shanghai? Do you like Shanghai? The answers shouldnt be: No, I havent been to Shanghai. And I dont even know anything about Shanghai! Now, Ill recommend you to go to visit Shanghai in summer vacation or winter vacation or spring break or every time youd like, youd want, because Shanghai is a very nice city. If you go there, youll soon like it!
我想回到上海，但只是去拜访。虽然上海很好，但是我想住在这里，是因为我想在这里学习。我作业很少，这里的空气比上海的好。上海的天气很热。一年之中最好去上海季节是春天，因为在春天那里的天气是凉爽和温暖的。但有些人问我:为什么我们不在秋天去那里?秋天也是凉爽和温暖的。我不这么认为，因为在上海,秋天仍然很热。我想推荐这个地方给其他人，是因为我希望越来越多的人了解和访问我的家乡。我希望如果我问我的朋友们：你去过上海吗?你喜欢上海吗?答案不会是：不,我没有去过上海。我甚至对上海一无所知!现在，我将推荐你在暑假或者寒假或春假或者是随时你想去的时候去上海，因为上海是一个非常美丽的城市。如果你去那里，你很快就会喜欢它!