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高考英语作文:写信 Letter

时间:2016-08-16 15:02:05 来源:中国英语作文网

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假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文,来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息,写信介绍住房的情况,并告知住房面积为25平方米,月租500元。

注意:1.词数:100左右:

2.参考词汇:房租Tent(n.)

范文一:

Dear Bob,

Im very happy to receive your letter, and Im glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but Ill try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.

Hope you will come here soon!

All the best!

Yours,

Li Hua

亲爱的鲍,

我很高兴收到你的来信,我很高兴听到你会去中国学习中文。我已经找到了你的菲亚特。在芳草街,不远处就是我们中文学校。你可以坐11路车,前一站就是中文学校。公寓第三层有3间,其中一间是卧室,另一间是浴室和厨房。这里有一张床,一张沙发,一张桌子和几把椅子,在这25平方米的小公寓里,租金是每月500元。也许这辆菲亚特不是你的愿望,但我会尽我最大的努力来满足你的需求。如果不够,写信给我,我会找另一个更好的地方。

希望你不久就来这儿!

所有最好的!

你的

李华

满分理由:本文格式正确,意思表述完整,行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用,还使用了以which,引导的非限定性定语从句,从而使文章层次分明,富于变化,不愧为考场佳作。

范文二:

Dear Bob,

Welcome to China! You wrote to me to find a place for you.

I have found an apartment on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese School. It is on the third floor and therere three rooms in it: a bedroom, a kitchen, and a bathroom. There is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair in the bedroom. The house is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan per month.

Also from this house you can get to your school easily. Just take the No.11 bus at the bus-stop in front of the building. It is only one stop. At last, will you please tell me the time you arrive? Then IU be able to meet you at the airport,   see you.

Best wishes !

Yours,

Li Hua

亲爱的鲍,

欢迎来到中国!你写信给我找个地方给你。

我已经找到了一套公寓附近的芳草街荐新学校。它在第三层,里面有三个房间:一间卧室,一间厨房和一间浴室。卧室里有一张床,一张沙发,一张桌子和一把椅子。房子面积25平方米,每月租金500元。

也从这所房子你可以很容易地到你的学校。就在楼前的汽车站乘11路公共汽车。它只是一站。最后,请你告诉我你到达的时间吗?然后我就可以去机场接你,看到你。

最美好的祝愿!

你的

李华

范文三:

满分理由:本文格式正确,内容完整,表述清楚,衔接紧密流畅,时态语态使用准确,特别是结尾末段适度的发挥,既充实了内容,又符合逻辑,成为本文与众不同的亮点。

Dear Bob,

How are you these days?

Im so glad to know that youll come to our city to learn Chinese. You asked me to find a place for you. Now Ive found one which I think is pretty good. The place is on Fang Cao Street which is near the No.11 bus stop. Its just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese School.

There are three rooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a bedroom. Though it is not very big, only 25 square metres, I think it is suitable. By the way, the rent is 500 yuan per month. I hope youll like it. If not, Ill try to find another place for you.

Yours,

Li Hua

亲爱的鲍,

这些天你怎么了?

我很高兴知道你会来我们的城市学习中文。你让我找个地方给你。现在我发现了一个我认为很不错的。这个地方是在芳草街11号附近的巴士站。它只是一个停止远离建中文学校。

有三间房间,一间厨房,一间浴室和一间卧室。虽然不是很大,只有25平方米,我觉得很适合。按方式,每月租金为500元。我希望你会喜欢它。如果没有,我会试着找另一个地方给你。

你的,

李华

满分理由:本文内在逻辑性很强,由远及近。由外及内,层次分明,错落有致。同时让步状语从句运用得恰到好处,很出彩,再则结构完整,从开头的问候语到结尾都很完备。

范文四:

Dear Bob,

Im so glad that you are coming to learn Chinese here. Ive already found you a house near our school. Id like to tell you something about it.

You may get on No.ll bus at Fang Cao Street and the next stop is just Jian Xin Chinese School. The house is near the school. It is about 25 square metres. In the bedroom, there is a bed, a sofa standing against the wall and a table near the window. You may find a light on the table and a chair next to it. There are two other rooms connecting the bedroom. The left one is a bathroom and the right one is a kitchen. So you may cook by yourself. The rent for the house is 500 yuan per month.

Hope youll enjoy staying here!

Yours,

Li Hua

亲爱的鲍,

我很高兴你要来学中文。我已经找到你在我们学校附近的一所房子。我想告诉你一些关于它的事。

你可能会得到关于No.ll巴士曹芳街,下一站就是建新中文学校。这房子离学校很近。大约25平方米。在卧室里有一张床,一张靠窗的沙发和一张靠窗的桌子。你可以在桌子上找到一个灯,在它旁边有一把椅子。有另外两个房间连接的卧室。左边的是一间浴室,右边的是厨房。所以你可以自己做饭。这房子的租金是每月500元。

希望你会喜欢呆在这里!

你的,

李华

满分理由:本文内容具体,详略得当,表述方式很有创造力和新意,长短句并用,语言结构富于变化,错落有致,顺畅圆润,尤其是情态动词和分词的运用很独到,为文章增色不少。

范文五:

Dear Bob,

Im glad to hear from you.

Welcome to our city in september. Ive found a suitable house for you.

The house is on Fang Cao Street, not far from the Jianxin Chinese School. If you take the No.11 bus, it is just one stop.

It is a flat on the third floor of a building. It has three rooms, a living-room, a bathroom and a kitchen. You can cook yourself. The mirror, the basin and the bathtub are very convenient for you. In the living-room, there is a bed, a sofa and a desk with chair. The desk is next to the window. It will be good for study. The total size is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan a month.

Will you be satisfied with this flat, or you want another one? Just let me know. Ill try my best to help you.

Yours,

Li Hua

亲爱的鲍,

我很高兴收到你的来信。

欢迎到我们的城市在九月。我找到了一个适合你的房子。

房子在芳草街,从建中文学校不远。如果你乘11路公共汽车,它只是一个停止。

这是一栋第三层的公寓楼。它有三个房间,一个客厅,一个浴室和一个厨房。你可以自己做饭。镜子、盆和浴缸对你很方便。客厅里有一张床、一张沙发和一张椅子。桌子在窗户旁边。这将是很好的学习。总面积为25平方米,每月租金500元。

你会满意这个单位,或者你想要另一个吗?只是让我知道。我会尽我所能帮助你。

你的,

李华

满分理由:本文内容详实,描述具体细腻,用词适当准确,如suitable house、not far from等,另外文中的选择疑问句也很有新意。