一、题目
针对目前全国大量大学生面临就业的严峻形势，你班同学展开了热烈的讨论，请你根据以上提示及下面表格中的内容，介绍本次讨论情况并谈谈自己的看法。
70%的同学认为不要期望太高的收入，及早就业，减轻家庭负担;到西部、农村等地区，寻找更多的发展机遇。
20%的同学支持继续深造或去职校学习实用技能，为今后择业做更好的准备。
10%的同学尝试自己创业。你的看法(请考生联系自己拟定内容，列举两至三点)
Increasing numbers of college graduates are finding themselves in a situation where too many jobseekers are fighting for survival. Our class has had a heated discussion on this problem. Some students hold different ideas.___________________________________________________
二、主要问题
本次作文中，学生易犯的错误有：
1、不会翻译自己创业;
2、把继续深造翻译成：go further studies;
3、自己的观点和看法写得空洞无物;
4、没有对70%，20%等百分数进行适当处理;
5、学生的作文大多停留在完成任务上，很少有精彩之处。
三、参考范文
The majority of the students, making up 70%, are more realistic and dont expect a high salary. They think it sensible to land a job as soon as possible. In this way, they hope to reduce the burden on their families. They also believe there are better opportunities for development offered in the west or in rural areas.
大部分的学生，占70%，更现实，不要期望高工资。他们认为尽快把工作做的很明智。以这种方式，他们希望减轻他们的家庭负担。他们还认为，在西方或在农村地区提供更好的发展机会。
In order to be better prepared for the future job-hunting, one fifth of them choose to stay in universites for further education, or go to vacational schools to learn practical skills. The rest 10% are brave enough to start a company of their own, thus creating jobs for other graduates as well as themselves. The choice isboth challenging and rewarding.
为了给今后的求职做好准备，五分之一的人选择呆在大学深造，或进入职业学校学习实用技能。其余的10%个人都有足够的勇气去开创自己的公司，从而为其他大学毕业生创造就业机会。选择的是挑战和奖励。
As for me, I will take my interests and abilities into account while choosing a job. It may not be a decent job with a handsome income, but will surely be most suited to me. I hope my first job will offer an opportunity to learn new skills and gain rich experience.
至于我，我会把我的兴趣和能力考虑，同时选择一个工作。这也许不是一份体面的工作，收入可观，但肯定是最适合我的。我希望我的第一份工作将提供一个机会，学习新的技能和获得丰富的经验。
70% of them think it makes sense that they realize an early employment by lowering their income expectations, thus reducing the burden on their families. They also believe therere better opportunities for development if they go to work in the west or rural areas. 20% of them consider full employment an unrealistic goal, so they choose to continue their further study or go to vocational schools to learn some practical skills to make better preparations for future careers. Finally, the rest 10% determine to set up their own businesses.
70%的人认为他们通过降低收入预期来实现早期就业，从而减轻他们的家庭负担。他们还认为，如果他们在西部或农村地区工作，有更好的发展机会。20%的人认为充分就业是一个不切实际的目标，所以他们选择继续学习或继续职业学校学习一些实用技能，以更好地为未来的职业生涯做准备。最后，其余10%个决定建立自己的业务。
As for me, I think after a series of timely measures taken by the government, we are confident about and capable of overcoming the current difficulties and challenges and the employment prospects for graduates will be better soon. So all we need to do now is plan and act in ways that reflect the reality, to assure that we make full use of our talent and skills.
至于我，我认为政府采取了一系列的及时措施，我们有信心，有能力克服目前的困难和挑战，毕业生就业前景会更好。所以我们现在需要做的就是计划和行动，以反映现实的方式，以确保我们充分利用我们的才能和技能。