看图作文在英语作文中是大家普遍缺乏练习的一种类型，一个提高的方式就是看范例和点评，针对其中的错误进行自我修正。
父母重负下的婚礼:
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As is vividly betrayed in the drawing above, a newly-married couple are hugging each other happily and their parents are holding a huge amount of debt hardly. In addition, there is one sentence Establish their own happiness on the basis of parents hardship, which highlights that nowadays many young people are seeking for their own happiness despite their parents feeling. So what causes this phenomenon? From my point of view, there are mainly two reasons. First, with the promotion of family planning, many families only have one child, which makes the child so spoilt that they are used to having the high quality life. Second, many children have the psychology of comparing mentality, which makes them have the wish to hold a luxurious wedding ceremony.In order to solve this problem, children should develop the virtue of thrifty. A marriage is a lifetime matter, and it wont be changed by luxurious wedding ceremony. So they should refuse luxurious wedding ceremony. Furthermore, parents should not spoil their children by satisfy all their demands. I think under the joint effort of parents and children, the ethos of keeping up with the peer comparison will be decreased significantly.
上面的图画生动的描绘出一对新婚夫妇快乐地互相拥抱，但是他们的父母却背负巨额债务。此外，有一句话建立在他们对父母的痛苦的基础上的自己的幸福，它点出现在很多年轻人都在寻找自己的幸福，尽管他们的父母为此付出许多。那么是什么导致了这种现象？从我的角度来看，主要有两方面的原因。首先，因为计划生育的推广，很多家庭只有一个孩子，把孩子给宠坏了，他们习惯高质量的生活。第二，许多孩子都有攀比心理，这让他们希望举行一个豪华的婚礼仪式。为了解决这个问题，要培养孩子节俭的美德。婚姻是一辈子的事情，它不会被豪华的婚礼改变。所以他们应该拒绝奢华的婚礼仪式。此外，家长不应该溺爱他们的孩子，并且无限制地满足他们所有的要求。我认为在父母和孩子的共同努力下，与同龄人攀比的现象将显著下降。