英语写作指导:高考英语写作高分的秘诀
1.句式要有变化:① 复合句、并列句
② 倒装句
③ 强调句型 It is that
④ 非谓语动词。
⑤ 虚拟语气
⑥ 固定句型结构
⑦直接引语与间接引语:多种时态,动名词、不定式,并列结构
1.tooto 2.sothat. 3.such athat4.not onlybut..also 6.neithernor
7.such as 8.not until 9.so that 10.eitheror
2.要使用高等级词汇及短语
① 使用高等级词汇 ② 使用短语 ③ 使用谚语
④ 使用表强调的词,如alone, just, single, only, notat all; on the earth; the very; on earth等
⑤ 使用修辞手法:明喻,暗喻,夸张,头韵,拟人等
as busy as a bee; as proud as a peacock; as blind as a bat; as cool as a cucumber
3. 使用连接词,过渡自然,连贯通顺,一气呵成
1) 用于按空间展开的段落之中的连接词和过渡词有:
above before me here on the left across below in the distance on the right
beyond nearby opposite to over also further next to on top of
up down close to beneath under around near to along
2) 用于按时间顺序展开的段落之中的连接词和过渡词有
soon, then, suddenly, at the same time, next, early, this morning /year, now, after, at present, later, afterwards finally, at last, all of a sudden , at noon , in the morning/afternoon/evening
3) 用于按分析法展开的段落之中的连接词和过渡词有
first, second, etc. now for this purpose; but as a result furthermore;finally at last moreover
also therefore likewise;another for example next; yet for instance on the contrary
once in addition in summary;such in this case on the other hand
then otherwise in conclusion thus
4) 用于按比较法展开的段落之中的连接词和过渡词有
another moreover in addition
equally important too, also at the same time
besides then in the same way in fact like, similarly
5) 用于按对比法展开的段落之中的连接词和过渡词有
on the contrary different from on the other hand in contrast to despite
in spite of, yet, but ,whereas, unlike nevertheless not onlybutalso herethere years)one agotoday the formerthe latter thennow someothers onethe other oncenow
on
6)逻辑关系
递进: then, besides, furthermore, moreover
转折: however, but, on the country, after all
总结: finally, at last, in brief,
in conclusion。强调: indeed, certainly, surely, above all。对比: in the same way, just as, on the one handon the other hand
4.写作中使用率最高覆盖面最广的基本句式
以下是短文写作中使用率最高、覆盖面最广的基本句式,每组句式的功能相同或相似,考生可根据自己的情况选择其中的1-2个,做到能够熟练正确地仿写或套用。
1、表示原因
1)There are three reasons for this... 2)The reasons for this are as follows...
3)The reason for this is obvious... 4)The reason for this is not far to seek...
5)The reason for this is that...6)We have good reason to believe that...
例如:There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our life.Firstly,peoples living standard has been greatly improved.Secondly,most people are well paid, and they can afford what they need or like.Last but not least,more and more people prefer to enjoy modern life. 注:如考生写第一个句子没有把握,可将其改写成两个句子。如:Great changes have taken place in our life. There are three reasons for this.这样写可以避免套用中的表达失误。
2、表示好处
1)It has the following advantages.2)It does us a lot of good.3)It is beneficial to us.4)It benefits us quite a lot. 5)It is of great benefit to us.
例如: Books are like friends.They can help us know the world better,and they can open our minds and widen our horizons.Therefore,reading extensively is of great benefit to us.
3、表示坏处
1)It has more disadvantages than advantages. 2)It does us much harm. 3)It is harmful to us.
例如: However,everything divides into two.Television can also be harmful to us.It can do harm to our health and make us lazy if we spend too much time watching television.
4、表示重要、必要、困难、方便、可能
1)It is importantfor sb.to do sth.
2)We think it necessary to do sth. 3)It plays an important role in our life.
例如: Computers are now being used everywhere,whether in the government,in schools or in business.Soon, computers will be found in every home,too.We have good reason to say that computers are playing an increasingly important role in our life and we have stepped into the Computer Age.
5、表示措施
1)We should take some effective measures. 2)We should try our best to overcomethe difficulties. 3)We should do our utmost in doing sth. 4)We should solve the problems that we are confrontedwith.
例如: The housing problem that we are confronted with is becoming more and more serious.Therefore,we must take some effective measures to solve it.
6、表示变化
1)Some changes have taken place in the past five years. 2)A great change will certainly be produced in the worlds communications. 3)The computer has brought about many changes in education. 例如: Some changes have taken place in peoples diet in the past five years.The major reasons for these changes are not far to seek.Nowadays,more and more people are switching from grain to meat for protein,and from fruit and vegetable to milk for vitamins.
7、表示事实、现状
1)We cannot ignore the fact that... 2)No one can deny the fact that... 3)There is no denying the fact that... 4)This is a phenomenon that many people are interested in. 5)However,thats not the case.
例如: We cannot ignore the fact that industrialization brings with it the problems of pollution.To solve these problems, we can start by educating the public about the hazards of pollution.The government on its part should also design stricter laws to promote a cleaner environment.
8、表示比较
1)Compared with A,B... 2)I prefer to read rather than watch TV. 3)There is a striking contrast between them.
例如:Compared with cars,bicycles have several advantages besides being affordable.Firstly,they do not consume natural resources of petroleum.Secondly,they do not cause the pollution problem.Last but not least,they contribute to peoples health by giving them due physical exercise.
9、表示数量
1)It has increasedfrom...to... 2)The population in this city has now increased to 800,000. 3)The output of July in this factory increased by 15% compared with that of January.
例如: With the improvement of the living standard,the proportion of peoples income spent on food has decreased while that spent on education has increased.
再如: From the graph listed above,it can be seen that student use of computers has increased from an average of less than two hours per week in 1990 to 20 hours in 2000.
10、表示看法
1)people havedifferent attitudes towards sth. 2)people have different opinions on this problem. 3)people take different views ofthe question. 4)Some people believe that...Others argue that...
例如: people have different attitudes towards failure.Some believe that failure leads to success. Every failure they experience translates into a greater chance of success at their renewed endeavor.However, others are easily discouraged by failures and put themselves into the category of losers.
再如: Do lucky numbers really bring good luck?Different people have different views on it. 注:一个段落有时很适宜以问句开始,考生应掌握这一写作方法。
11、表示结论
1)In short,it can be said that ... 2)It may be briefly summed up as follows. 3)From what has been mentioned above,we can come to the conclusion that ...
例如: From what has been mentioned above,we can come to the conclusion that examination is necessary,however, its method should be improved.注:例句1可用于任何一个段落的结论句;例句3则多用文章结论段的第一句。
12、套语
1)Its well known to us that ... 2)As is known to us,... 3)This is a topic that is being widely talked about. 4)From the graphlisted above,it can be seen that ... 5)As a proverb says,Where there is a will,there is a way.?
例如: As is well known to us,it is important for the students to know the world outside campus. The reason for this is obvious.Nowadays,the society is changing and developing rapidly,and the campus is no longer an ivory tower. As college students,we must get in touch with the world outside the campus.Only in this way can we adapt ourselves to the society quickly after we graduate.
再如: Does it pay to be honest?This is a topic that is being widely talked about and different people have different opinions on it.
5. 英文写作必背之35句型
一、the + ~ est + 名词 + + 主词 + have ever + seen
the most + 形容词 + 名词 + + 主词 + have ever + seen
例句:Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen.
海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩。 Mr. Chang is the kindest teacher that I have ever had. 张老师是我曾经遇到最仁慈的教师。
二、Nothing is + er than to + V Nothing is + more + 形容词 + than to + V
例句:Nothing is more important than to receive education.
没有比接受教育更重要的事。
三、cannot emphasize the importance of too much.
例句:We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much.
我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。
四、There is no denying that + S + V ...
例句:There is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse. 不可否认的,我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。
五、It is universally acknowledged that + 句子
例句:It is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us.
全世界都知道树木对我们是不可或缺的。
六、There is no doubt that + 句子
例句:There is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired.
毫无疑问的我们的教育制度令人不满意。
七、An advantage of is that + 句子
例句:An advantage of using the solar energy is that it wont create any pollution. 使用太阳能的优点是它不会制造任何污染。
八、The reason why + 句子 is that + 句子
例句:The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air./ The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can supply fresh air for us.
我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。
九、So + 形容词 + be + 主词 + that + 句子
例句:So precious is time that we cant afford to waste it.
时间是如此珍贵,我们经不起浪费它。
十、Adj + as + Subject+ be, S + V
例句: Rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory. {by no means = in no way = on no account 一点也不}
虽然我们的国家富有,我们的生活品质绝对令人不满意。
十一、The + ~er + S + V, the + ~er + S + V
The + more + Adj + S + V, the + more+ Adj + S + V 例句:The harder you work, the more progress you make. 你愈努力,你愈进步。
The more books we read, the more learned we become.
我们书读愈多,我们愈有学问。
十二、By +Ving, can
例句:By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy.
借着做运动,我们能够始终保持健康。
十三、enable + Object+ to + V
例句:Listening to music enables us to feel relaxed.
听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松。
十四、On no account can we + V
例句:On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge.
我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值。
十五、It is time + S + 过去式
例句:It is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the traffic problems.
该是有关当局采取适当的步骤来解决交通问题的时候了。
十六、Those who
例句:Those who violate traffic regulations should be punished.
违反交通规定的人应该受处罚。
十七、There is no one but
例句:There is no one but longs to go to college.
没有人不渴望上大学。
十八、be + forced/compelled/obliged + to + V
例句:Since the examination is around the corner, I am compelled to give up doing sports.
既然考试迫在眉睫,我不得不放弃做运动。
十九、It is conceivable that + 句子
It is obvious that + 句子
It is apparent that + 句子
例句:It is conceivable that knowledge plays an important role in our life. 可想而知,知识在我们的一生中扮演一个重要的角色。
二十、That is the reason why ~~~
例句:Summer is sultry. That is the reason why I dont like it.
夏天很燠热。那就是我不喜欢它的原因。
二十一、For the past + 时间,S + 现在完成式.
例句:For the past two years, I have been busy preparing for the examination. 过去两年来,我一直忙着准备考试。
二十二、Since + S + 过去式,S + 现在完成式。
例句:Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard. 自从他上高中,他一直很用功。
二十三、It pays to + V
例句:It pays to help others.
帮助别人是值得的。
二十四、be based on
例句:The progress of the society is based on harmony.
社会的进步是以和谐为基础的。
二十五、Spare no effort/expense to + V
例句:We should spare no effort/expense to beautify our environment.
我们应该不遗余力的美化我们的环境。
二十六、bring home to + 人 + 事
例句:We should bring home to people the value of working hard. 我们应该让人们明白努力的价值。
二十七、be closely related to ~~
例句:Taking exercise is closely related to health.
做运动与健康息息相关。
二十八、Get into the habit of + Ving= make it a rule to + V
We should get into the habit of keeping good hours.
我们应该养成早睡早起的习惯。
二十九、Due to/Owing to/Thanks to + N/Ving,
例句:Thanks to his encouragement, I finally realized my dream.
因为他的鼓励,我终于实现我的梦想。
三十、What a + Adj + N + S + V!= How + Adj + a + N S+ V!
例句:What an important thing it is to keep our promise!
How important a thing it is to keep our promise!
遵守诺言是多么重要的事!
三十一、Leave much to be desired
例句:The condition of our traffic leaves much to be desired.
我们的交通状况令人不满意。
三十二、Have a great influence on
例句:Smoking has a great influence on our health.
抽烟对我们的健康有很大的影响。
三十三、do good to ,do harm to
例句:Reading does good to our mind.读书对心灵有益。
Overwork does harm to health.工作过度对健康有害。
三十四、pose a great threat to
例句:pollution poses a great threat to our existence.
污染对我们的生存造成一大威胁。
三十五、do ones utmost to + V = do ones best
例句:We should do our utmost to achieve our goal in life.
我们应尽全力去达成我们的人生目标。1.句式要有变化:① 复合句、并列句
② 倒装句
③ 强调句型 It is that
④ 非谓语动词。
⑤ 虚拟语气
⑥ 固定句型结构
⑦直接引语与间接引语:多种时态,动名词、不定式,并列结构
1.tooto 2.sothat. 3.such athat4.not onlybut..also 6.neithernor
7.such as 8.not until 9.so that 10.eitheror
2.要使用高等级词汇及短语
① 使用高等级词汇 ② 使用短语 ③ 使用谚语
④ 使用表强调的词,如alone, just, single, only, notat all; on the earth; the very; on earth等
⑤ 使用修辞手法:明喻,暗喻,夸张,头韵,拟人等
as busy as a bee; as proud as a peacock; as blind as a bat; as cool as a cucumber
3. 使用连接词,过渡自然,连贯通顺,一气呵成
1) 用于按空间展开的段落之中的连接词和过渡词有:
above before me here on the left across below in the distance on the right
beyond nearby opposite to over also further next to on top of
up down close to beneath under around near to along
2) 用于按时间顺序展开的段落之中的连接词和过渡词有
soon, then, suddenly, at the same time, next, early, this morning /year, now, after, at present, later, afterwards finally, at last, all of a sudden , at noon , in the morning/afternoon/evening
3) 用于按分析法展开的段落之中的连接词和过渡词有
first, second, etc. now for this purpose; but as a result furthermore;finally at last moreover
also therefore likewise;another for example next; yet for instance on the contrary
once in addition in summary;such in this case on the other hand
then otherwise in conclusion thus
4) 用于按比较法展开的段落之中的连接词和过渡词有
another moreover in addition
equally important too, also at the same time
besides then in the same way in fact like, similarly
5) 用于按对比法展开的段落之中的连接词和过渡词有
on the contrary different from on the other hand in contrast to despite
in spite of, yet, but ,whereas, unlike nevertheless not onlybutalso herethere years)one agotoday the formerthe latter thennow someothers onethe other oncenow
on
6)逻辑关系
递进: then, besides, furthermore, moreover
转折: however, but, on the country, after all
总结: finally, at last, in brief,
in conclusion。强调: indeed, certainly, surely, above all。对比: in the same way, just as, on the one handon the other hand
4.写作中使用率最高覆盖面最广的基本句式
以下是短文写作中使用率最高、覆盖面最广的基本句式,每组句式的功能相同或相似,考生可根据自己的情况选择其中的1-2个,做到能够熟练正确地仿写或套用。
1、表示原因
1)There are three reasons for this... 2)The reasons for this are as follows...
3)The reason for this is obvious... 4)The reason for this is not far to seek...
5)The reason for this is that...6)We have good reason to believe that...
例如:There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our life.Firstly,peoples living standard has been greatly improved.Secondly,most people are well paid, and they can afford what they need or like.Last but not least,more and more people prefer to enjoy modern life. 注:如考生写第一个句子没有把握,可将其改写成两个句子。如:Great changes have taken place in our life. There are three reasons for this.这样写可以避免套用中的表达失误。
2、表示好处
1)It has the following advantages.2)It does us a lot of good.3)It is beneficial to us.4)It benefits us quite a lot. 5)It is of great benefit to us.
例如: Books are like friends.They can help us know the world better,and they can open our minds and widen our horizons.Therefore,reading extensively is of great benefit to us.
3、表示坏处
1)It has more disadvantages than advantages. 2)It does us much harm. 3)It is harmful to us.
例如: However,everything divides into two.Television can also be harmful to us.It can do harm to our health and make us lazy if we spend too much time watching television.
4、表示重要、必要、困难、方便、可能
1)It is importantfor sb.to do sth.
2)We think it necessary to do sth. 3)It plays an important role in our life.
例如: Computers are now being used everywhere,whether in the government,in schools or in business.Soon, computers will be found in every home,too.We have good reason to say that computers are playing an increasingly important role in our life and we have stepped into the Computer Age.
5、表示措施
1)We should take some effective measures. 2)We should try our best to overcomethe difficulties. 3)We should do our utmost in doing sth. 4)We should solve the problems that we are confrontedwith.
例如: The housing problem that we are confronted with is becoming more and more serious.Therefore,we must take some effective measures to solve it.
6、表示变化
1)Some changes have taken place in the past five years. 2)A great change will certainly be produced in the worlds communications. 3)The computer has brought about many changes in education. 例如: Some changes have taken place in peoples diet in the past five years.The major reasons for these changes are not far to seek.Nowadays,more and more people are switching from grain to meat for protein,and from fruit and vegetable to milk for vitamins.
7、表示事实、现状
1)We cannot ignore the fact that... 2)No one can deny the fact that... 3)There is no denying the fact that... 4)This is a phenomenon that many people are interested in. 5)However,thats not the case.
例如: We cannot ignore the fact that industrialization brings with it the problems of pollution.To solve these problems, we can start by educating the public about the hazards of pollution.The government on its part should also design stricter laws to promote a cleaner environment.
8、表示比较
1)Compared with A,B... 2)I prefer to read rather than watch TV. 3)There is a striking contrast between them.
例如:Compared with cars,bicycles have several advantages besides being affordable.Firstly,they do not consume natural resources of petroleum.Secondly,they do not cause the pollution problem.Last but not least,they contribute to peoples health by giving them due physical exercise.
9、表示数量
1)It has increasedfrom...to... 2)The population in this city has now increased to 800,000. 3)The output of July in this factory increased by 15% compared with that of January.
例如: With the improvement of the living standard,the proportion of peoples income spent on food has decreased while that spent on education has increased.
再如: From the graph listed above,it can be seen that student use of computers has increased from an average of less than two hours per week in 1990 to 20 hours in 2000.
10、表示看法
1)people havedifferent attitudes towards sth. 2)people have different opinions on this problem. 3)people take different views ofthe question. 4)Some people believe that...Others argue that...
例如: people have different attitudes towards failure.Some believe that failure leads to success. Every failure they experience translates into a greater chance of success at their renewed endeavor.However, others are easily discouraged by failures and put themselves into the category of losers.
再如: Do lucky numbers really bring good luck?Different people have different views on it. 注:一个段落有时很适宜以问句开始,考生应掌握这一写作方法。
11、表示结论
1)In short,it can be said that ... 2)It may be briefly summed up as follows. 3)From what has been mentioned above,we can come to the conclusion that ...
例如: From what has been mentioned above,we can come to the conclusion that examination is necessary,however, its method should be improved.注:例句1可用于任何一个段落的结论句;例句3则多用文章结论段的第一句。
12、套语
1)Its well known to us that ... 2)As is known to us,... 3)This is a topic that is being widely talked about. 4)From the graphlisted above,it can be seen that ... 5)As a proverb says,Where there is a will,there is a way.?
例如: As is well known to us,it is important for the students to know the world outside campus. The reason for this is obvious.Nowadays,the society is changing and developing rapidly,and the campus is no longer an ivory tower. As college students,we must get in touch with the world outside the campus.Only in this way can we adapt ourselves to the society quickly after we graduate.
再如: Does it pay to be honest?This is a topic that is being widely talked about and different people have different opinions on it.
5. 英文写作必背之35句型
一、the + ~ est + 名词 + + 主词 + have ever + seen
the most + 形容词 + 名词 + + 主词 + have ever + seen
例句:Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen.
海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩。 Mr. Chang is the kindest teacher that I have ever had. 张老师是我曾经遇到最仁慈的教师。
二、Nothing is + er than to + V Nothing is + more + 形容词 + than to + V
例句:Nothing is more important than to receive education.
没有比接受教育更重要的事。
三、cannot emphasize the importance of too much.
例句:We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much.
我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。
四、There is no denying that + S + V ...
例句:There is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse. 不可否认的,我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。
五、It is universally acknowledged that + 句子
例句:It is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us.
全世界都知道树木对我们是不可或缺的。
六、There is no doubt that + 句子
例句:There is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired.
毫无疑问的我们的教育制度令人不满意。
七、An advantage of is that + 句子
例句:An advantage of using the solar energy is that it wont create any pollution. 使用太阳能的优点是它不会制造任何污染。
八、The reason why + 句子 is that + 句子
例句:The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air./ The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can supply fresh air for us.
我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。
九、So + 形容词 + be + 主词 + that + 句子
例句:So precious is time that we cant afford to waste it.
时间是如此珍贵,我们经不起浪费它。
十、Adj + as + Subject+ be, S + V
例句: Rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory. {by no means = in no way = on no account 一点也不}
虽然我们的国家富有,我们的生活品质绝对令人不满意。
十一、The + ~er + S + V, the + ~er + S + V
The + more + Adj + S + V, the + more+ Adj + S + V 例句:The harder you work, the more progress you make. 你愈努力,你愈进步。
The more books we read, the more learned we become.
我们书读愈多,我们愈有学问。
十二、By +Ving, can
例句:By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy.
借着做运动,我们能够始终保持健康。
十三、enable + Object+ to + V
例句:Listening to music enables us to feel relaxed.
听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松。
十四、On no account can we + V
例句:On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge.
我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值。
十五、It is time + S + 过去式
例句:It is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the traffic problems.
该是有关当局采取适当的步骤来解决交通问题的时候了。
十六、Those who
例句:Those who violate traffic regulations should be punished.
违反交通规定的人应该受处罚。
十七、There is no one but
例句:There is no one but longs to go to college.
没有人不渴望上大学。
十八、be + forced/compelled/obliged + to + V
例句:Since the examination is around the corner, I am compelled to give up doing sports.
既然考试迫在眉睫,我不得不放弃做运动。
十九、It is conceivable that + 句子
It is obvious that + 句子
It is apparent that + 句子
例句:It is conceivable that knowledge plays an important role in our life. 可想而知,知识在我们的一生中扮演一个重要的角色。
二十、That is the reason why ~~~
例句:Summer is sultry. That is the reason why I dont like it.
夏天很燠热。那就是我不喜欢它的原因。
二十一、For the past + 时间,S + 现在完成式.
例句:For the past two years, I have been busy preparing for the examination. 过去两年来,我一直忙着准备考试。
二十二、Since + S + 过去式,S + 现在完成式。
例句:Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard. 自从他上高中,他一直很用功。
二十三、It pays to + V
例句:It pays to help others.
帮助别人是值得的。
二十四、be based on
例句:The progress of the society is based on harmony.
社会的进步是以和谐为基础的。
二十五、Spare no effort/expense to + V
例句:We should spare no effort/expense to beautify our environment.
我们应该不遗余力的美化我们的环境。
二十六、bring home to + 人 + 事
例句:We should bring home to people the value of working hard. 我们应该让人们明白努力的价值。
二十七、be closely related to ~~
例句:Taking exercise is closely related to health.
做运动与健康息息相关。
二十八、Get into the habit of + Ving= make it a rule to + V
We should get into the habit of keeping good hours.
我们应该养成早睡早起的习惯。
二十九、Due to/Owing to/Thanks to + N/Ving,
例句:Thanks to his encouragement, I finally realized my dream.
因为他的鼓励,我终于实现我的梦想。
三十、What a + Adj + N + S + V!= How + Adj + a + N S+ V!
例句:What an important thing it is to keep our promise!
How important a thing it is to keep our promise!
遵守诺言是多么重要的事!
三十一、Leave much to be desired
例句:The condition of our traffic leaves much to be desired.
我们的交通状况令人不满意。
三十二、Have a great influence on
例句:Smoking has a great influence on our health.
抽烟对我们的健康有很大的影响。
三十三、do good to ,do harm to
例句:Reading does good to our mind.读书对心灵有益。
Overwork does harm to health.工作过度对健康有害。
三十四、pose a great threat to
例句:pollution poses a great threat to our existence.
污染对我们的生存造成一大威胁。
三十五、do ones utmost to + V = do ones best
例句:We should do our utmost to achieve our goal in life.
我们应尽全力去达成我们的人生目标。