中考英语作文:给校长的一封信 A Letter to the University
Direction: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic: A letter to the university president about the canteen service on campus, you should write at least 100 words, and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:
假设你是李伟,请你就本校食堂的状况给校长写了一封信,内容涉及食堂的饭菜质量、价格、环境、服务等等,可以是表扬,可以是批评建议,也可以兼而有之。
应试写作学与练第二期参考范文:
January 11th, 2015
Dear Mr. president,
As a regular student at our college, I have some complaint to make about the canteen service on campus.
Firstly, the canteen environment is very bad. Actually, it is becoming more and more crowded and noisy with an ever larger presence of vocational students every term. Secondly, the canteen workers are bad-mannered. Far from being warm and kind-hearted, they always seem to be cold and rude to us students. Thirdly and most importantly, the dishes at our canteen are too expensive, though they are by no means good quality or delicious. The survey the Student Union carried out last week reveals that on average a student will spend 10 to 12 yuan on meals every day. This is for more than the food expenses of students in the neighborhood colleges.
Nutritious and delicious meals well within the students' means are very important for young students. I really wish measures could be taken to improve our canteen service.
2015年1月11日
尊敬的总统先生,
作为我校的一名普通学生,我对校园食堂的服务有一定的抱怨。
首先,食堂的环境很不好。事实上,它正变得越来越拥挤和嘈杂的职业学生的每一个更大的存在。其次,食堂工人不礼貌。他们的热情和善良,远没有热情和善良,他们似乎对我们的学生是冷淡和粗鲁的。第三,最重要的是,我们食堂的菜太贵了,虽然不是很好的品质还是美味。上周,学生会进行的一次调查显示,一个学生每天都会花10到12元的钱。这是因为附近的大学学生的伙食费。
在学生的营养和美味的膳食是非常重要的年轻学生。我真的希望能采取措施来改善我们的食堂服务。